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Governments Must Ensure That Their Major Cities Receive The Financial Support - Flagged
national development is considered as a development of city also rural areas . fund is the necessary for development either city or village . for development of cities like , roads , public parks , mall etc all need funds .but here is the issue preserved tradition . we very well known that traditions are preserved and generated in rural area not in cities . moreover , the population is much large in cities but in our daily life style we are forgetting our tradition we have no time for our cultural tradition . but in rural area they are still present .
first of all , development is nation is not only depend on development of cities. nation development is consider as a whole development . in villages or rural area still lack of facilities . in india , here are 60percent village . there are lack of many facilities like school , roads , electricity etc. fund is needed for rural area so that village also can develop .if development of nation is consider development of rural area is also needed.
moreover , traditional and cultural ritual are present and generated in villages . in cities we are forgetting our traditional festivals ,we are just running for our career . we have no time for follow the cultural and also it is impossible to live in our old traditional . banglore in india is the most developed city , it is called silicon valley . but there are lack of tradition . city is enough developed , if more funds are invested in the develop city, it is worthless. so the money is invested for rural area , there actually need the fund.
it is objection here many cities has heritage property so development is needed because it increase tourism , but it can't be say that cultural and ritual are preserved there . in india delhi is the capital of india .there are many heritage properties , but the tradition are not preserved there . here the issue is to provide fund where traditions are preserved .
in sum up , funds are invested there,where it demands . if we want to develop whole nation it is require to develop rural area as well as cities . traditional and cultural aspects are generated in village so , it is require to invest fund in villages for development.
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