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LaceFace
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Jan 24th, 2010
 The last sentence of the first paragraph is a little confusing. Maybe try rewording the last couple sentences from the second paragraph,too.

Other than that, I really liked your essay. Congrats on your accomplishment :)
January,24 2010

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BrianneB
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 I agree with LaceFace that the first sentence needs rewording. Perhaps break it into two separate sentences if you can. Otherwise, I think it was a well written essay.
February,03 2010

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Taylorsss
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 Yeah i agree with both the first sentence does need rewording
February,06 2010

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