Descriptive Essay
moon_lovr
-Descriptive Essay-

There is something very dear and important to me. Although it may not seem like something very significant, it truly is. My room to me is extremely valuable plainly, because it is mine and it is the way I like it to be. There are so many of my possessions that make it mine and that make it unique and special to me. I would most certainly, not like it any other way.



As you enter my room, you see light teal walls. You can see and feel the sun shining through my window. My comforter is a silky metallic teal that is extremely thick, soft, and warm with many pillows that are the same tone as the comforter. My bed is a full sized bed where I take many naps and relaxing sleep filled nights that I love.



The smell of my room is the smell of myself. When I enter my room, it smells like home to me and comforts me. It is a clean, warm scent that is utterly inviting. My room is small but tidy and is always kept very neat. I keep everything in its precise setting, in order for it to be easy for me to get to my belongings. If anyone were to misplace one of my things, I would undoubtedly notice it.



My room has a full bed, an entertainment system with a television, stereo, books, movies, nail polishes, body sprays, and much more. It has two large mirrors with a side table where I have my alarm clock and my lamp on. There is also a framed picture on the wall of a waterfall with the words “creativity” on it. One could say it is a mellow and at ease room. The curtains are the same color as the comforter and are over the window as well as over my closet. On my other wall, are my awards such as my student of the month awards as well as my tennis awards.



On my entertainment system, I have all of the books I use that come in handy. I have my English dictionary and Spanish dictionary as well as my Thesaurus and a few of my favorite books that I have read.



This room is particularly important to me because, one winter, my family and I traveled to Mexico over the vacation, however, we came back to find the ceiling of my room completely destroyed due to the rain and because it had become too moist to stay intact. We got home and my room was a disaster. I had to wait for almost a month because they were fixing it. Yet, finally, they restored it and I was able to organize it the way I chose to which made it even better because I had the chance to rearrange it however I wanted to.



My room is now and has been my sanctuary for many years. I find comfort in it and love to spend my time their listening to music while lying on the fluffy bed or watching television. It is very valuable to me because it is my room and plainly, because of how comfortable it is to me. I love everything about it.

-Moon_lovr


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Blaze2591
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Good description of your room....you did good, as that was your first assignment.
September,27 2009

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Gloce
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I'm guessing the thing you were describing was your room. Well you did a good job on describing your room. If this was your only assignment (describe something) you did well. You use love and comfort a lot to describe yourself, which can get a bit repetitive.
September,13 2009

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Moon_lovr
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Yes, the task was to describe something that was dear to me, or important. You're right about my repetition with love and comfort, and thank you for your comment. This has really encouraged as well as helped me.
September,13 2009

Marly
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I think you did a good job deccribing your room. it seem that you love your room a lot. is that the case.
October,08 2009

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Carolineru
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You did very well describing your room, but perhaps the essay would turn out more fluent if you were to add more descriptive words. Don't say "you can see" too much, it ruins the feeling. Good luck!
October,14 2009

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Moon_lovr
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Thanks everyone for the comments an advice. I'll take it all into consideration.
November,01 2009

Sam
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Get rid of the first paragraph because it makes you sound like a materialist . The conclusion is very good. The descriptions are very good but if you were to implement links to your life with those objects, the essay would be much more significant.
January,23 2010

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