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Thesis for AP United States History



Thesis: After World War I, America wanted to never have a war of that scale to develop, from this desire a increasing sense of isolation developed, a depression only reinforced these ideals, but when war was imminent America abandoned these principles in favor of a interventionist approach to the Second World War.



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http://www.collegeboard.com/prod_downloads/ap/students/ushistory/ap04_frq_ushistory_b.pdf


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Gilburt3
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"After World War I, America wanted to never have a war of that scale to develop, from this desire aN increasing sense of isolation developed, a depression only reinforced these ideals, but when war was imminent America abandoned these principles in favor of a interventionist approach to the Second World War."

"...desire AN increasing..."

That is one long run-on sentence... I really don't even understand what you are trying to say. I also think you are missing some commas...
March,13 2009

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I'll Be Bach
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Your ideas are there, yet simplicity conveys the objective more elegantly. A thesis should be bare and unambiguous.
April,04 2009

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