University Honors Program Admisson Essay
Cristina09
People tend to daydream about meeting someone who’s made a great difference in the world, someone like Martin Luther King Jr., Benjamin Franklin and even Ghandi. I’m one of those “people”.

Today, being a witness of this amazing event of formal President Barack Obama’s inauguration, I can honestly say that he’s the one person whom I’d love to meet. One main reason of wanting to meet the United States current President would be that I know he’ll be one of the best presidents, willing to give it his best to better our country and make history. He wants “Change “, which is something I truly admire. President Obama is not just the first African-American President, but one of the many presidents that show that great determination about his plans to better our nation. For these and many other reasons I faint at the idea of meeting President Barrack Obama.

President Obama has had so many accomplishments, which include being the third to have been popularly elected, being the only Senate of the Congressional Black Caucus, and being characterized by a nonpartisan publication as a "loyal Democrat", that actually having the opportunity to meet this remarkable person, I would have so much to discuss, and ask him about. Besides his undertakings, my main question would have to be his feelings toward these upcoming years as the new President of our beautiful country. His plans headed for the new laws and his tactics on the concerns of our community. After conversing on this matter, I would ask questions concerning his life as the fifth African-American Senator in U.S. history and his many other comings and goings. As a final point I would tell him how immensely proud and thankful we are of him.

Overall, as stated before, President Barack Obama is the one person I would beyond doubt have a desire to meet.


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The essay is a little short, but gets to the point. What is the assignment?
February,09 2009

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You might not want to use quotes for emphasis its kind of confusing.
February,22 2009

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